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by Claretdan
Wed Jul 18, 2018 9:28 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Lancashire Lightening
Replies: 44
Views: 5335

Re: Lancashire Lightening

I really fancy us to get to Finals Day this year. Just hope we can beat the Yorkies on Friday.
by Claretdan
Wed Jul 11, 2018 12:46 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Phil Bardsley
Replies: 71
Views: 8641

Re: Phil Bardsley

Obviously, Lowton is the better right back but I thought Bardsley was decent when he played. He got off to a pretty good start and then his form slipped a bit.
by Claretdan
Fri Jun 01, 2018 8:02 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Pat Phelan
Replies: 30
Views: 5161

Re: Pat Phelan

Phelan is brilliant. Really looking forward to seeing what happens tonight.
by Claretdan
Fri Oct 27, 2017 10:44 am
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Burnley Articles
Replies: 22
Views: 4309

Re: Burnley Articles

Hi everyone, I've been working on my style over the last few weeks, taking feedback on board, and I believe that I have improved. Here is my latest piece if anyone wants a read, focusing on who could replace Dyche should he leave in the near future: https://claretdan.wordpress.com/2017/10/27/dyche-l...
by Claretdan
Fri Sep 29, 2017 12:01 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Charlie Taylor
Replies: 42
Views: 6933

Re: Charlie Taylor

He looks like a good player. I think he would do a job for us if Wardy got injured
by Claretdan
Wed Sep 27, 2017 4:46 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Burnley Articles
Replies: 22
Views: 4309

Re: Burnley Articles

Claretdan, I'm nipping out shortly, so don't have time to read it yet, but regarding grammar/spelling, I'd recommend Grammarly. For my two main sites that I run, I have people write articles, many of them because they want some reference work for their CVs, or because they just like writing. Before...
by Claretdan
Wed Sep 27, 2017 3:20 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Burnley Articles
Replies: 22
Views: 4309

Re: Burnley Articles

Dan, an easy read, but, and take this as positive feedback, you need to pay more attention to your grammar. I say that knowing the different rules journalists apply to newspaper-based grammar (which tends to differentiate more in headings and sub-headings, and as you have done - started sentences w...
by Claretdan
Wed Sep 27, 2017 2:05 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Burnley Articles
Replies: 22
Views: 4309

Re: Burnley Articles

May I offer some constructive criticism and comments! Overall I think you use the phrase 'the Clarets' far to often. Wouldn't it be better to say 'Burnley', or 'they' etc. occasionally? Are sentences now considered paragraphs in modern writing? I understood it was not good practice to start a sente...
by Claretdan
Tue Sep 26, 2017 1:43 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Burnley Articles
Replies: 22
Views: 4309

Re: Burnley Articles

Adverts do more harm than good when you have a small amount of people visiting your site. The pennies you will gain from them will affect the amount of people that want to visit your site. If I have any advice, its that you focus on having visitors return due to your well written articles and don't...
by Claretdan
Tue Sep 26, 2017 1:09 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Burnley Articles
Replies: 22
Views: 4309

Re: Burnley Articles

CleggHall wrote:Good luck Dan, you write well with an easy, flowing style.
Thanks, much appreciated
by Claretdan
Tue Sep 26, 2017 12:25 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Burnley Articles
Replies: 22
Views: 4309

Burnley Articles

Hi all, I recently set up a blogging site to get experience before University where I aim to study Journalism. I will be posting regular articles on the Clarets. I also completed a work-experience placement at the club where I wrote a couple of pieces for the club's website (you may have read my pie...
by Claretdan
Mon Jun 12, 2017 8:26 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: What will our first signing be a free or a transfer fee ?
Replies: 7
Views: 1411

Re: What will our first signing be a free or a transfer fee ?

Would love us to go for Ledley now he's available on a free
by Claretdan
Sun Apr 02, 2017 12:38 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Team for Stoke
Replies: 72
Views: 9947

Re: Team for Stoke

Heaton
Lowton Keane Mee Ward
Boyd Westwood Barton Brady
Barnes Gray
by Claretdan
Tue Mar 07, 2017 8:38 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Keane V Mee
Replies: 28
Views: 5324

Re: Keane V Mee

Think Mee is every bit as good as Keane, wonder why he doesn't get the publicity Keane does
by Claretdan
Fri Feb 24, 2017 6:27 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: Ranieri sacked
Replies: 174
Views: 18201

Re: Ranieri sacked

Sadly, I think that it shows how much power the players have, and how easy it is to sack a manger nowadays
by Claretdan
Thu Dec 01, 2016 6:54 pm
Forum: The Bee Hole End
Topic: We wont win away all season
Replies: 189
Views: 27710

Re: We wont win away all season

Wouldn't be surprised if we win at Stoke again